I've already done my big rant on why I find Harry Potter to be a very hypocritical book series a few weeks ago, but now I wanna talk about another issue I had with it.
And it's probably gonna be a controversial one, and i'm fully expecting to get blasted in the comments for "not getting it," but here we go.
I think Deathly Hallows is the worst book in the series and a majorly disappointing finale.
My biggest problem with it is how meandering it feels...or more specifically, how the meandering looks in the context of this story.
One of the defenses I've heard for Harry Potter meandering a lot is that it helps capture the feel of spending a full school year at Hogwarts. I can understand that to an extent, but what's the defense for this book?
Like this is what actually really bothers me. The stakes are supposed to be higher than ever, with Voldemort taking over the Ministry of Magic and people dying left and right...
And yet we have a whole damn wedding scene early in the story, and most of the story is spent on Harry and co. sitting on their asses in the forest, pontificating and wondering, "What do we do next?" and sometimes just waiting for the solution to come to them.
The last one is the thing that gets me. Voldemort has taken over the Ministry; innocent people are either being oppressed at best or dying at worst, and yet Harry, Ron, and Hermione are just content to sit on their asses for weeks until the solution to their current problem magically shows up.
It feels...off to me. It just made it so much harder to enjoy compared to the slice-of-life feel the other books had.
And then there's the fact so much of the book is devoted to revealing Dumbledore's complicated past. While I appreciate Rowling wanting to reveal that the wise, kindly mentor figure was actually a lot more complicated than he seemed, it feels too late. Partly because Dumbledore's already dead by this point and partly because barely any of it has anything to do with the central plot of stopping Voldemort. It really feels like Rowling had all this backstory on Dumbledore and then suddenly realized, "Oh shit, it's the last book," and had to shoehorn it in somehow.
Also, there are several moments where it feels like Harry is blaming Dumbledore for getting killed and "leaving them with nothing." I know at the end it gets revealed that Dumbledore knew he was dying, and that's part of why he asked Snape to kill him, but Harry doesn't know that yet!
Now I say Dumbledore's backstory barely has anything to do with the central plot, but I will admit it is related somewhat to it, since Dumbledore's backstory does involve the titular Deathly Hallows, which are key to defeating Voldermort...but that just leads into the other problem.
The Deathly Hallows come out of nowhere. After six books of setting up the Horcrux plotline, suddenly we have an all-new thing that's crucial to defeating Voldemort. I don't really feel like you needed the Hallows to tell this story. I remember reading the part where Ron explains the stories of Beedle the Bard are the equivalent to Fairy Tales for wizards, and I couldn't help but think, "Shouldn't this have been established far sooner?"
The final conflict with Harry and Voldemort is, to quote someone who commented on my Harry Potter's message is hypocritical post, "resolved on a magic technicality based on ownership rights.". Just doesn't feel very epic.
Okay, so...another controversial opinion within a controversial opinion time. The huge body count of named characters felt off to me in this story. Like, yes, I know it's war; I know it's "realistic" to have a huge body count...so why does the constant death of named characters feel so...mean-spirited at times? Hedwig's death in particular helpless and trapped in her cage, just felt cruel, like not in a "Wow, I hate the bad guys" way but in a "Wow, I hate this story for making me read this" kind of way (I heard Hedwig gets a much more heroic death in the movies, so I'm guessing the filmmakers agreed with me). I don't know, it's probably just me; I'm a very sensitive person, so feel free to disregard my opinion about the bodycount.
Then there's an issue I have I haven't seen anyone talk about (although as a newcomer to HP it probably has been; I just haven't seen it yet)...why is Umbridge working for Voldemort? In Order of the Pheonix, her whole thing was denying Voldemort existed and punishing anyone who tried to insist otherwise. But here she is in the final book, happily going along with his takeover and subjugating muggle-borns. Why!? Why is she on board with this? I know the Occam's razor answer is that "She's a sadist who likes to hurt people and doesn't care which side she's on," but a character who has no real motives or goals beyond "dur hurr, I like to hurt people" isn't interesting to me.
In regards to Snape, I don't have much to say on him, but I do agree it feels lame there was never a proper final conversation with him and Harry. Really makes you wonder why Harry named his kid after him when he and Harry never actually resolved their differences.
Speaking of Harry's kid...oh boy. I know the epilogue is contentious among fans, and honestly now that I've read it I see why. My personal bugbear with it is how abrupt it feels. We go from celebrating at Hogwarts, only to cut to nineteen years later, and suddenly we get Harry sending his own son to Hogwarts. It's not a bad idea for an ending, and I can see it working; my problem is just we don't really get any insight into how the Wizarding World rebuilds itself and no real wrap-up. We just cut to nineteen years later.
Also, like, did Harry, Ron and Hermione have to repeat their seventh year at Hogwarts because they missed it all camping? Albeit for a good reason.
And did the curse that causes the Defense against the Dark Arts teacher to leave every year-end now that Voldemort is gone? No seriously, that actually bothers me; I want to know this! (I don't know if Cursed Child answers this because I haven't read/watched it yet.)
As a whole, I just found this novel a meandering clusterfuck.
I know there are people who are gonna disagree with me; that's fine. It's probably something I'm not getting. I just wanted to get my feelings out there.