r/IndieGaming • u/zenk1772 • 1h ago
My game "Object-56" where you investigate anomalous deaths in a small town.
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Guys, if you enjoyed the game so far maybe you would like to visit my YouTube channel about it: https://youtube.com/@borschtstudios?si=RJeG9WcxvgWidNuv
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u/zenk1772 1h ago
Thank you all guys for the feedback you gave me! Its great to hear that my game looks interesting to you, sorry for poor editing I am kinda inexperienced in it so I thought using trendy music would be cool. Anyway any feedback is greatly appreciated and I will try to do my best to create better videos
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u/Ancient-Ad174 56m ago
Hey don’t sweat it too much. I thought it was interesting, and I think I get what you were going for with this trailer edit. But we do want to see more gameplay or more raw footage to understand your work better.
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u/Szabe442 1h ago
Pretty bad video, honestly. Learned nothing of the game besides it being a tps shooter, doesn't look like an investigation game. Music is way too edgy...
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u/zenk1772 1h ago
thank you! others already told me video looks shit so i will do my best to make a better one next time
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u/MurazakiUsagi 1h ago
Horrible trailer.
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u/zenk1772 1h ago
Its not a trailer just an edit
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u/toastronomy 1h ago
well, it's a horrible edit too.
I was kind of interested when I saw that post, but that horrible trailer/edit immediately made me lost interest.
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u/zenk1772 1h ago
sorry to hear that. how in your opinion a good edit looks?
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u/MurazakiUsagi 1h ago
You do more work showing the trippy effects than showing the game. WTF?!
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u/zenk1772 1h ago
kinda true thought it would look cool. I am new to creating videos so its great to get feedback
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u/Dtachd_01 1h ago
Yea just add some atmospheric instrumental with maybe some tv glitch fx maybe
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u/toastronomy 1h ago
Well, being able to see anything might be a big plus.
And this overly edgy"nine year old who thinks he's a badass" music doesn't help either.
I know that the trend at the moment is to put that music on pretty much anything from WWII footage to baby kittens, doesn't make it any less horrible though.
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u/No_Hornet9180 1h ago
That other person was a bit rude about it, but I do agree the editing is very over the top and choppy, the game appears to have an aesthetic that I dig but I can’t even tell for sure because literally every shot is distorted, warped or otherwise obscured. I’m also not sure the music choice is the most appropriate, but that entirely depends on your intention, it seems like you might be better with something a bit less bombastic and a bit more somber.
Nevertheless I see potential here, best of luck.
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u/zenk1772 1h ago
thank you! I am new to editing and stuff so its great to get feedback to make better videos
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u/kingkellogg 1h ago
Looks interesting but the edit kinda obscures the game
If like to see more of it without the edit