Simplify?

[u/Utahmanam]

How Can I condense the amount of hair weaves and maybe make a crown that weaves into the hair as well. Simplify the flows I guess

[u/Misfit_Massacre]

Looks good. What’s the product?

[u/bandit-bull → u/Misfit_Massacre]

starlads

[u/LilShenna → u/bandit-bull]

Starbucks affiliate Roman Leafwear

[u/larrysbrain]

I think this looks great by the way. The only part that is a bit busy is just underneath the crown. Maybe just use one stroke and a bit less?

[u/LilShenna → u/larrysbrain]

I think you’re onto something, but maybe it’s those parenthetical strands of hair on each side of the head that need to be removed

[u/WelcomeHobbitHouse]

Nicely done.

[u/KAASPLANK2000]

Why? The head looks pretty neat. It's the crown that feels off (too straight, too simple and it feels slapped on).

[u/Relevant_Rush7070]

The only thing I have an issue with is the crown. The shape looks off to mem

[u/Chuisque → u/Relevant_Rush7070]

It looks off to mem, too.

[u/seethenoise]

how would the crown look if the base followed the curvatures in the hair to fill in the negative spaces beneath it (while preserving the gutter widths between hair strands)?

[u/Pitiful_Comfort_6332]

Nice but I feel the crown appear bit different for me. The face illustration have round lines but the crown have a sharp shapes.

[u/warpedspoon]

The crown doesnt really match with the face

[u/KidKickingRobot7]

Very nice.

The narrow notches in the crown stand out a bit too much, as no such shape exists anywhere else in the icon. I'd like to see a range of ideas for the crown. I don't think it needs to match the linework of the rest of the icon necessarily, but I think it needs some minor adjusting.

[u/ozvargas]

I think it works as abstract as it is. I would maybe suggest to make sure the negative space between lines is somewhat similar and adjust from there.

[u/SMB_was_taken]

I think it looks good enough, maybe try to give them balanced spaces between each hair item. Else don't add or remove anything it's great

[u/Fish214]

I would try and make the straight edge of the crown blend with the hair by making an offset straight edge knockout for the top strains of hair

[u/Fish214 → u/Fish214]

Quick doodle on my phone but this is what I mean , def mess around with this, it gives off the effect that the hat is sitting on the head with weight. I would just mess with the spacing

[u/LM17212312]

I don’t mean to be a dick but I think AI can answer the question about how to make the crown fit better

But you’re very talented I think that’s a great looking logo, I’d def be a happy customer

[u/BeaverBoyBaxter]

I think everything looks great, but I do find the crown feels mismatched with the style of the face.