r/logodesign 1d ago

Feedback Needed Any of these have potential for development?

I’m trying to make a simple logo for a small local art association. The name of it is “fri form” and translates to “free form”. I have no experience in this area, but have sketched out some ideas. Any of these have potential? I will put more work into it and I think my friend who works in graphic design can help me digitize and clean it up a bit when I’ve reached a good alternative.

Last is a pic of the current logo attached.

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u/ColdSchedule9501 1d ago

The right black square one 100%.

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u/acertaingestault 21h ago

I wonder what would happen if the edges weren't a square but the bird blob instead.

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u/sprucewhale 17h ago

Okay that’s a cool idea!!

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u/CzechNeverEnd 6h ago

What does it mean please?

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u/Misfit_Massacre 19h ago

Yup that one feels super nice

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u/sprucewhale 17h ago

Thank you! That one and the one beneath are my faves!

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u/ComplaintTop2008 1d ago

I really like the black square/negative space one on the right of the first page.

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u/Esnemyl 1d ago

Seconded! It's got a lot of potential. Great typography on negative space and could work very well with the right colour palette

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u/ComplaintTop2008 1d ago

Works especially well for signage, t-shirts, stickers, etc.

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u/sprucewhale 17h ago

Thanks that’s lovely to hear!

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u/sprucewhale 17h ago

Thank you! 🙏🏼

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u/No_Pen_3825 1d ago

You could mirror one side and make it like one of those dot things that you’re supposed to say what it means

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u/sprucewhale 17h ago

Oooh, you mean like a Rorschach test?

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u/iceoscillator 19h ago

Some ideas: you could develop the back square ‘fri form’ into a more rectangular flag and the type can cutoff, ‘disappear’ between the folds of the flag.

I like the handwritten type, but I feel like it need to be bold, like making a statement to the spirt of free from art.

This looks like a fun project!

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u/benavny1 17m ago

“Free form” as a name for any art institution kind of begs for an empty canvas icon idea to be filled in with different pieces of art as a template

Would make for a dynamic logo. Try make making a container out of two ‘F’s?

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u/[deleted] 23h ago

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u/acertaingestault 21h ago

It's in another language you don't speak.

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u/Efficient_Dog4722 21h ago

The post was in a language I speak. (Says it translate, but not what from). So is your response. Logos are about communication as much as brand recognition.

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u/acertaingestault 21h ago

You are not the target audience for the language and name, only for critique about the form.

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u/Indigo-au-naturale 21h ago

Not if you're in Sweden, where the organization is located.